Reviews for Requiem for the Perfect Girl
PipaJJ chapter 5 . 9/25/2011
What the...O_O How can this possibly not have more reviews? What do people consider literature nowadays?...sigh

If you couldn't tell, I really like this story. Not love, not yet. But I have no doubt I'll come to love it. So far this is one of the best stories I've read on this site, I just don't understand how you could not have more recognition. You definitely deserve it with this. The characterization is just amazing, not to mention the story itself. You made me feel so angry for Talia after what Tobino had done to her. I had no feelings for him whatsoever. I couldn't have cared less if he died.

This is a powerful story so far, and I can only see it's going to get more entrancing as I go along. I hope you never give up on writing.
review chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
first chapter is alluring. reading the second now.
the-Imagined chapter 24 . 12/4/2007
oh dear
the-Imagined chapter 23 . 12/4/2007
im reviewing!
Sweet123 chapter 22 . 12/3/2007
what happened to Cael
Sweet123 chapter 21 . 12/3/2007

You dont need to improve anything but picking a target audience because sometimes the language switches between teen and pre-teens
Sweet123 chapter 20 . 12/3/2007
the-Imagined chapter 22 . 11/29/2007
im reviewing!
the-Imagined chapter 21 . 11/29/2007
im reviewing!
the-Imagined chapter 20 . 11/29/2007
im reviewing!
the-Imagined chapter 19 . 11/11/2007
o.O nice cliffie!

you should put a line when the time switches because it will evade those few minutes of confusion when you switch times and places with no warning.
Jinx chapter 19 . 11/9/2007
Cool story
the-Imagined chapter 9 . 11/2/2007
im reviewing!
the-Imagined chapter 8 . 11/1/2007
im reviewing!
the-Imagined chapter 7 . 11/1/2007
im reviewing!
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