Reviews for artificial roses
miss-ellen chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
whoa. scary.

you sound like my ex. that's kinda scary. damn him, the asshole.

not that you're an asshole, coz i don't know you and have no right make this judgement but yeah, my ex was. :D
sleeplessblue chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
:) I like the idea of this song- "I'm unhurt from your hits." But keep on working on your grammar. And it might help if you put a line or something between the chorus and the next verse because I couldn't tell where the chorus ended.

My favorite line: "I'm unhurt from your good intentions/ because good intentions don't exist" :D nice!