Reviews for Too Dream
partingissuchsweetsorrow chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
This is a very original poem and a good one a that! You said something about your layout being different. Well, different is a good thing when it comes to writing because different will always catch the readers eye. Keep up the good work!
Orual chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
I think this is good, but I would recommend you capitalize the first word of each line and check your spelling. You mispelled another (anther) and lie (lye is a soap). Other than that, good work.