Reviews for Love Kills |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, not really impossible, the whole fainting in arms thing. i've fainted in the arms of a perfect stranger when i was seven and he's one of my best friends and my major mutual crush. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loving it so far! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, so please update it soon. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() O I like this one too! Her dad's an ass. Haha Tyler's a cutie... in that sexy hot dangerous assasin kind of way lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() well by the sounds of it, it should get pretty interesting so i'll be waiting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it. It keeps getting better. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, Tyler having some feelings going on? Anyway, I am slightly out of it and have nothing to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice touch including James in this point of the story... other than the cliche' hero and basic 'did' (damsel in distress), there's also the hero's voice of reason or mentor, in the form of James. I like the story so far, but you haven't explained what is it with her dad? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story so far... |
![]() ![]() ![]() At the start, Sean was a lil' bit standoffish and all that (not much of a solid chapter) but in this chapter you've shown a more REAL version of him. Meanwhile I like Chealsey and Reenie, they seam to be more complex characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now THIS sounds interesting. I'm allready starting to like your characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit is right! She's gonna hit the floor if no one catches her, (insert laugh here). I shall sit and wait for more of this awesome story to come out. Where's my chocolate... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, you do still have my interest. I think I missed the last update. Anyway, for your information, you mixed up history and science at the beginning of this chapter. Which one is it? You know what? This is pretty exciting. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, this is soo interesting. Please update soon. I can't wait. |
![]() ![]() HEY! whats up? loving the story! its totally awsum and i can't wait for the next chapter so update soon thanx ;) just soo yah know i like love the stories with like the assassins and like them falling in love with someone...i don't know why...i just do...so i'm sticking with this story...haha just soo you know you got another fan...tata for now :D |