Reviews for So Right, It's Wrong
IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
Ooh, that one's really cool. I think everyone should read that.:)
lifexdeath chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
Oh. I like this poem. There were some rough spots with syllable issues, but I really liked the message. I don't particularly like war, but where would we be without it?

I really liked the last two lines.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
I couldn't help but laugh at the God bless line. Though this is hardly a poem to laugh at. It is too true. I mean, I hate war. It is so hard. We need to defend ourself, but where do we draw the line? I don't know. Every day I am thankful for those who give their lives for us, but it is so terrible. I want to be like them. They are so selfless, that they would put their lives on the line for us. I don't know what else to say, I just have to have faith and trust. Thank you for this poem, it was beautiful.