Reviews for Open Your Eyes
000000000 chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
*wide eyes* This really applies to someone in my life right now.. all she does is complain about themselves, without realizing that she's hurting everyone else. Good job!
Which Mistake am I chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
simply beautiful!
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
O good! People do need to open their eyes. Why don't they feel bad when they hurt someone? I don't get it.
Arcadia Lynch chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
I like this. The repetition brings it all together and it has a good message.
ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Short and simple but meaningful all the same, my favorite. I love it, it's going on my favs list :)I love the last two lines, they wrap up the poem wonderfully.
Anna chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Wow this totally describes me. jk jk jk. seriously though, it's a cool poem. I especially like these lines: Open your eyes, realize what you’ve done. Open your eyes, you’ve hurt someone.
K's Moonshadow chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
I really like this one. It has a strong message to it, and it is short but it still feels complete, you know? Like it was meant to be short. idk. Anyway, good job. Keep writing! (and check out some of my stuff if you like)

Much Love,

*K's Moonshadow*