This was unbelievably touching. I simply adored it.

And just letting you know that you made me cry like a baby. Keep up the amazing work.

Holy crap girl, by far an amazing story! I'be never really actually stuck to a story on fiction sites till the very end, and I actually think yours is the first one. You are an amazing writer, and actually I cried so hard for the last 3 chapters (haha) and I'm still crying now... like hard. Haha, amazing story! Good job!

Beautiful.

Wow. thanks for making me cry, I know i needed it.

Your story was incredible. thanks for sharing.

Okay. I think that I should first start out by saying that this was one of the best stories I've ever read on here. Until you completely fucked up the ending. I just don't understand what you were thinking. Having the hero commit suicide because of unrequited love isn't romantic in the least. You just don't do that in a romance story. The ending didn't make me cry as much as say WTF? I as too pissed to really be heartbroken at the end. I feel cheated. I followed this story for the longest time, waiting months in-between updates at times, for this? For them not to finally overcome their differences, but for the guy to commit suicide and Monica only come to appreciate him after he's dead? Are you kidding me? I'm sorry, but that was the worst ending ever. I'm pretty pissed. I somewhat feel as if I should have just never even read the end because it did not "justify the means". It just didn't add up. But, all of this having been said, I can still recognize good writing when I see it, and you have it. Even though I didn't necessarily like the ending, it was still well written and captivating. I guess if you're not a "happily-ever-after" person, you'll love it. Even in the midst of having disappointment crash over me I could still appreciate how good the [first part of] story was. All in all, great plot and written like a pro. Great job. I look forward to your next story (only this time I think I'll pass on the ending.

OMG! This has been so amazing! there has been times when I haven't wanted to read the next chapter, becuase it pained me to do so. But I read them, one after the ther and Now I'm happy I did.

This has been such an awesome story from start to finish, but I absolutely loved the three last chapters. I absolutely loved them.

Thay are beautiful, sad and everything else I love in a story.

AWESOME JOB!

/Sara

is he really dead?

Oh my God. I didn't think anyone could do it before I began reading this story, but I actually CRIED at the end. Wow. That was absolutely beautiful and moving and passionate and heart-wrenching all at the same time, (not to mention you used grammar and spelled correctly) and I absolutely LOVED it. Wow. Thank you so much for the hours of enjoyment you have given me, and I hope you never give up writing. Thank you!

you. are. fucking. amazing.

seriously.

this was one of the most amazing stories i have ever read. i couldn't have imagined a better ending for it.

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sad.

O...M...G...!

must keep reading!

it was just so sad to read the once upon a time thing and all it hurts that we had to see how everything turned out - giving birth and death... but i guess no matter how tragic the end seemed, Monica's struggle to survive in the wake of losing Darien for me was fitting to the story.

Congratulations for finishing the story and for making it as real and as emotion filled...

(i cried reading the last three chapters...just so you know...hehehehe)

WOW.

Didn't see that coming.

Or maybe I did and just didn't want to believe it.

You're really good at writing sad endings.

But I enjoyed following this story.

I hope you crank out another one soon.

Maybe this time a little happier?

Haha don't listen to me.

~Sara

There goes the waterworks again. This story was so amazing, I can't even put it in words. The irony was just amazing too. Gah I can't even tell you how much this story means to me.

I cried so hard when I read the poem. Wow.