Wow...I really REALLY hate Jane. And Monica is being such a jerk. I mean...he saved her from rape and she treats him like dirt. I'm pretty much just waiting for Greg to try to rape her and have Damien save her AGAIN. I can see that happening. Yay! He kissed her! YAY! Lol. But she SO doesn't deserve him. Jeez. Wow...just wow.

Great chapter, I loved it!

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

Okay, so I started out thinking of Damien as some sort of odd hero...and now I kinda hate him again cuz...he's being jerky about a girl who was nearly raped and was puking her guts up. I mean...that's just cruel. Then he turns around is all nice again. Now he's showing off to them about Monica. Jeez...he's a weird kid. And now I hate Monica. These characters are so in and out...everchanging. I love 'em, I hate 'em...it's so weird.

Pretty good chapter.

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

Huh...falling asleep at the keyboard. Fun stuff. I mean, really. I've done it. It's only bad when nosy paretns pop in and read your IM convos. Lol. Ok, the Branston brothers are plotting something. This won't end well. And wait...is Monica a Junior or Sophomore? That seems to be changing a lot...I'm very confused about it. Knew something would happen. Lucky Damien was there.

Sadly, I liked this chapter...despite the evil brother. Great chapter.

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

Wow...Rod's a real conversationalist. I mean, really. Lol. Ha...i was SO right abotu Damien being Alex. But I mean...it WAS a bit obvious, so I shouldn't be too proud about that. Okay, yea...that IS a little stalker-ish. Something tells me Monica's gonna be pissed whens he finds out it's Damien, and by then he'll have almost had her then all of a sudden she'll hate him. I would laugh. Okay, guess Rod DOES talk a bit...

Great chapter.

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

So where is Monica's mom now? Do they even see her anymore? And as for "Alex" I believe it's really Damien just trying to psyche her out more. If so...good for him.

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

Okay, Damien's looking kinda evil now. I mean, she prolly deserves it, but still. He's actually reminding me a bit of Cole in this chapter...and that's not good. Lol. Klutzes on crack. Nice. Jeez. This school REALLY hates goths.

Okay..now Damien's better and cooler. I keep going inbetween hating him and liking him. So odd.

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

Huh..interesting crowd. This story IS much dirtier than your usual writings...but in a teen kinda way. It's much more realistic than most stories out there. I like it. Taylor and Damien...go Taylor! The guys sounds kinda hot. Lol. Good for her.

I really liked this chapter.

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

Aw...good for Damien. He has a heart. YAY! Huh...nice way to get out of taking pills.

Great chapter. Kinda just set up the whole plot I'm guessing.

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

Lol...Damien's kinda funny and cool. And he has a pretty cool shirt. I can see you wearing one that says VAMPIRES ATE MY BRAIN.

Fun chapter. Reading more now.

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

Hey...I'm FINALLY reading Constancy. I know...I'm SO behind. But see, what I do is...I basically R&R three people's stories. And I'm furthest behind in yours, so I leave yours for last...and then I never get to them. I'll just have to focus on only your stories. Now, I've read the first couple chapters, but have yet to review them, so here goes...

Wow, a sophomore as cheer captain. Good for her. By the way, I love the use of the word shebang. I just like that word...I don't know why.

Great chapter. Have to read more.

Luvs and Hugs, ~Lola Maria~

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that's sad. it made me almost cry.

almost.

i like it.

I like the reference to Romeo and Juliet in the past two chapters, and I guess it's a good thing that Damien said what he did to Monica in front of Greg, but where will they go now?

my jaw dropped. omg he told about them right in front of the other guy. that was priceless just reading this. oh man i can't wait till u update again. oh is the school going to react now. thats going to be so interesting.

WOW! Another fantastic chapter! It is official- this is the best story ever written! I just wish it would have a happy-ish ending, or a sad one but not definitively sad, but in the end, it's your choice, Oh most holy author, we revere your name! :D Can't wait for the next one!

So far really good. It's hard to find good R&J stories. Keep up the good work!