|Reviews for Sunlight and Shadows|
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
This is a really good poem, I can relate to it. I like the last line the best, it's very powerful and a satisfying ending. The only thing I would suggest is that you punctuate the summary correctly if you want more people to read this, otherwise they will assume this entire poem is full of mistakes - which it isn't. You should leave spaces after commas in the summary.