| Reviews for The Cole Turns To Ash |
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   VioletGame chapter 6 . 1/2/2007 tHIS HAD ME LAUGHING MY PANTSs of. Keep going, I'm rooting for you |
| sucker-4-love chapter 6 . 1/1/2007 that was the most awsome chapter and i just found this story yesterday. so please write more this is the best story that ive read on this site so far... hope that it is updated soon.. i was just waitin for some priest to fuck some kid and i had a feeling about the principal too. really really good story. |
| McNoob chapter 6 . 12/31/2006 Holy shit, I have an account! O.o I didn't even know. On the bright side of things... I can review! Aren't you the lucky little pixie? I was feeling bad for not doing it before. But have not fear! You'll now be getting one review from me for every chapter. You better not let me down, boy. I... You're... you're great. I... love you? Aw, jeebs, I'm being stereotypically fangirlish. Seriously now. The plot in itself (or at least what the summary led me to believe) is quite basic, at first. Blah blah, unpopular guy, popular guy, blah blah, total opposites and they fall in love: "WOW! Never expected THAT to happen!" You... BLEW ME AWAY! *is blown away* (just to emphasize my point) Thou better not make this all cheesy, boy! I'm so sick of sappy teenage romance stories. I mean, what the fuck? What the hell kind of gullible mofo falls in love at 16? ... Have a good day/year 2007. |
| poppendol chapter 6 . 12/31/2006 Hey, Just found this story and it's funny, Colle is funyy. But are you going to have everybody have sex with everybody, because then my suspension of disbelieve is going to be suspended. But I am curious to know whether Colle is going to use all the pretty pictures. And, hey, Ashton is human, not Jesus, go figure. |
| shuushuu chapter 6 . 12/31/2006 I have just read all of this in one sitting! Its amazing...I dunno why you aint getting more reviews coz the writing is wow! and the plot is so fucking hilarious! new years in a few hours? We got 11 hours to go still.. Will be heading into central london on the tube in a couple of hours with my mates so that we can watch the fireworks at the london eye...Obviously the best thing is that the tube is free 2night! I was like totally shocked bout adam in this chapter tho coz he seemed so innocent uno? but i guess its always the quite ones... Uno i hope that nathaniel and rachael get together coz they sound so funny togtehr... i dunno if i like ashton at the moment...I like johnaton better, coz hes nice DOM IS A PRICK! Anyways...i hope you update soon coz im rele enjoying this story. HAPPY NEW YEAR AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY! DDF X |
| Blade of Athena chapter 5 . 12/29/2006 I love your story , the characters are so funny and original |
| hikarusasuniwa chapter 3 . 12/28/2006 Wow! You really portrayed the main character! Very nicely written :). |
| bahlovkarizma chapter 3 . 12/28/2006 This story is hillarious. I can't wait for the next update. |
| 123456654321 chapter 1 . 12/27/2006 haha, I like this story! 'Tis sweetness. um... yeah. 'Kay, bye. -Sara |
| Spazifiedcheerio chapter 1 . 12/27/2006 haha i think you did cole's character very well what with the pessimism and the AIDS rant. you really got across his , we don't know much about Ashton but you have already established a relationship between them which really helps the reader get to know the characters so great job and keep writing! |