Reviews for Make Believe
KaylaHeart chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
This is gorgeous. Lovely and true. There's a song like this, but it came out way after this poem. I love this!
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
this is just-stunning I can't believe someone wrote such an elegant piece
RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I really liked this, how you showed that love is only obscure happiness, used to make yourself feel better about yourself. It was beautifully written. Very nice.

Although, I wish there had been some punctuation here & there, but all in all, good.

-Rawr from the RM, link on my page.
Snow and Spindrift chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
wonderful poem, i love the cadence of it: seems so effortless and fluid. nice job!
Fan Fan chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Never to return...beautiful moment captured in a beautifully written poem. I love this work.
Jodie Sinclair chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
aww I love this one Abby. especially the begining
Melissa O'Day chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
oh yay! i absolutly love it! country songs...heck yeah...u stold my idea! hah hah just kiddin! thank you so mcuh for the comments u made my day!
S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
The message in this is great. I loved the emotion, and it was a good poem. I applaud you.

Jarlaxe chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
That was excellent, I like how you gave love a voice in song, well not you exactly, but how you said how love can be given a voice...yes I have no idea what im talking about ;( haha. Well good job anyways that was very nice.