Reviews for Parallel Parkway
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
You've a great idea here, with quite a nice build up. I'd recommend only some minor editiing just to tighten it up a little; but essentially this is a really good piece. (hope my suggestion doesn't offend as it really was not my intention)

Kept me reading throughout!

WELL DONE

KEEP WRITING!

F.C
skankyfrankieSTFU chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
seems great. can't wait to read more :]