One of them is gonna go too far

wtf zoe has resorted to bullying now? :-/

Sara is being really stupid

this girl is so vain

I very much loved this story.

What was with chapter 29? Chapter 27 ended brilliantly in my opinion, & I think chapter 29 completly ruined the happy ending. You should have just ended at chapter 27. This story was pretty fucking AWESOME though, I am impressed. )

I love this story so much i literally read it in 1 day. I feel so close to this book and so attached. It keeps me sane and whole insude and thats what reallu matters.

I just read this all in one night was such a wonderful story It has helped me to get the confidence to ask the girl of my dreams out and for that I thank you.

I know it's been a long time since you have done anything on your profile and it's most likely you do not use ficpress anymore but if you do and you see this review just remember people still want to know howthe sequel ends and if any others readers read this just give this story a review and we can get more attention to this story and maybe the sequel finished.

Also in chapter 28 in sara's letter it uses the name sloane I guess this is your real name and that you might like to remove it ;)

All the best Ellie

PS I think you should probably add this last chapter to the sequel instead. Give people their happy ending :P They will check your author page for a sequel anyway.

Can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews. It felt really authentic - different from a lot of the mush around ;D

I think a lot of what I could say has already been said by other reviewers, but the one thing I really did like, especially at the beginning was that you get the point of view from the 'popular girl', which is quite rare, it's normally the other way round. So this was almost like a guilty pleasure for me D

Hope it works out for you, to be honest I'm a bit scared to read the sequel O_o.

"I don't like you in so-many-levels."

made me laugh so hard P

Thank you for this story I'm really loving it.

wow this chapter was really good, seems like the story took off here. I loved that 'unnatural' line.

And also that paragraph in one of the previous chapters that started '...in the shadow of the weeping willow'.

Let me just say that I adore this story so much. This is, I believe, the 3rd time I've read it and I can say, I will probably read it again in the future. I love your characters, they are in my opinion, flawless (even if in the story they have flaws). I just love the story line they followed through. It made me laugh and it made me tear up. Great work. Keep writing. :D

this is a beautiful story

wait was it like an actual card?

lol?

awsome