Reviews for Don't let them know about us
Ace o' Hearts chapter 8 . 1/7/2007
Christ, you are writing everything. I still remember when you invited me to your bday party. You touching my face was freaky back then.

I thought you'd never do this Io! And why the hell did you change your name? You're no fucking Zoe and I'm not Dahl. Privacy protection? Maybe.

What's next? A lot of things happened between this chapter and your party. Christ, remember the soap thing? Are you going to write about that too? I hope you do, that was magic. Where is this all going to end?

Oh holy Mary! Are you going to write about the gym and the first time I went to your house? Are you going to write EVERYTHING we did?

Fuck... this will get kinda hot! Why didn't you tell me bout this be4? You idiotisk! I will keep an eye on this, remembering the old good times, well, not so old. Fuck, be sure to write about our songs, andand about that day with Stiffany andand our sweetsweet kisses school. Argh, remembering those times makes me mad too. I still hate Anjerklica, you know that. Write about our clothes and write about the cards!

Oh fuck, I remember I was so scared of talking to you in the beginning. You were always very sure of yourself, displaying such a backbone and I felt like a slime that could only blush whenever you came around.

BTW you looked pretty that day at the lunchroom, I think I never told you that. Well, your rack looked nice. :P;P

I miss you so fucking much Io. I can't wait to see you again. My bro misses you too. And me mom still can't talk about you. You're some sort of taboo and she can't get over it. I always tell her: leave Io and me alone, you have no say in my love life. XP

I really miss you. It's very cold here and there's no one to hug or kiss. :( My job is killing me and I don't think I'm going back. As soon as I save nuff, I will pay you a visit. Cuz damn, I miss you.

Love you so fucking much,

your älskling,

your ace o' hearts,

Sra C.
Poemi-chan chapter 6 . 1/6/2007
amazing! pure genius. please keep the great work up.
LDG69 chapter 7 . 1/6/2007
Great chapter! hope you update soon :)
Tsuta chapter 7 . 1/5/2007
Olalala, nice ending haha. I like this chapter I liked the last couple as well. Anyways it was a wonderful procrastination method (I have a paper due). Update soon! Looking forward to it.
Tsuta chapter 6 . 1/3/2007
I was going to ask you if it was based on real life (I saw your profile and became curious). I love stories based on true poeple an events, I think it makes them more enjoyable. I love this one so far. Anyways daily updates are FINE with me. Looking forward to the next.
LDG69 chapter 5 . 1/3/2007
This is pretty good so far. can't wait fo rthe next chapter. Update soon. n_n
Tsuta chapter 5 . 1/2/2007
Ah I like this so far! Very clever with the card names haha. Update soon.
Green Eyes chapter 5 . 1/2/2007
Definitely liking how often you update!

I think the whole suits of cards thing is a really excellet idea- and i really like how you've inked the suits to their personalities:)

Good job!
Green Eyes chapter 4 . 1/1/2007
...And it just gets better! I think you've got the chemistry between them down to a t- well done :) the only thing i'd pick on is that it is 'know', not 'now' in the title, but that's fairly minor.
Green Eyes chapter 2 . 1/1/2007
Thought the androgynous touch was good.
LDG69 chapter 3 . 1/1/2007
its good! keep 'em coming! .
Green Eyes chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
yay- first review!

This looks like its going to be a good one, can't wait to find out! Update soon, i'll be looking out for it :)
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