Reviews for Don't let them know about us
mm chapter 18 . 10/8/2009
omg this is too sad D':
mm chapter 5 . 10/6/2009
L to the O to the L

mm chapter 4 . 10/6/2009


Killian I chapter 27 . 8/20/2009
This story is beautiful.
Dust Errant chapter 29 . 6/17/2009
I just finished reading this, and while I'm much to tired and speechless to say much at the moment,(If I can get the nerve to, I will say more so in a review for chapter 28) I really just want to say i wish this story had ended on Chapter 28...both in real life and the fiction. Knowing this is a true story, and how much shit you've already went through it really tears at the heart to know that things did not go smoothly from here on out, but you in fact had to endure even more.

The vagueness of this chapter drives me insane as it really leaves one to wonder how this all ends. Are you two still together as a couple, or just friends now? The fact that question is important (to me) shows how much you were able to involve me in your life through your work for me to want things to be ok in the end. I know in several authors notes you indicate you and Sara are still together in some fashion, which really makes me hope, but the words in this chapter are just so ominous it frankly scares the shit out of me.

I know at the point of this review, your sequel is 12 chapters in and you haven't updated in a decent while. Considering the importance of these stories I really am hoping finishing the sequel is of some degree of high priority for you. Regardless, while I will probably watch for updates like a hawk, I lack the heart and strength to read it until you finish. I hope you can forgive me but reading something as heart wrenching as what I fear your sequel is, and being forced to wait for updates would literally kill me. Whether the ending is good or bad, I want to be able to read it it one lump sum. Again, please forgive my weakness _

PS. For the love of god,unless its completely fluff with no /drama next to the romance, I will flip out if you do a third part D: And hurry up and finish this sequel so I can read it _
STAGES chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
This story has affected me so badly. The night I finished this story, I didn't sleep. I didn't eat the next day, or sleep the next night. Love makes people the happiest that they possibly could be- and it makes them the most depressed they could ever be. Love stinks. I'm sorry for everything that has happend between you guys.

Jag beklagar till deras förlust om älska.
Omok chapter 29 . 7/30/2008
hi there. normally here, I would point out how immature my review is going to be, but no, not this time. I don't know what to say, how to say it, if i knew what that 'it' is in the first place. To roughly put this, I'm speechless. I have waited for this story for a while. Then I set it on the back of my mind, put away, hidden, in a place where i put all the stories that I've read. but every once in a while, thoughts would trigger out, slowly, craw in to me. in to my brain. about what happened between you guys. This story, you, Sara (if i have the right to call her that), made me think a lot, a lot harder than what a normal girl my age would think; or should think. Makes me wonder what really is love? I truly, and i really did, and still do believe, what you two shared was love, it was love, a once in a life time love. Most people would pity and say 'sad that it ended', but i'm guessing that isn't what you want? or you have heard enough of that? but I guess, like you pointed out, both of you were ignorant of love, ignorant of 'how' to love each other. - this love, whether in your eyes, in my eyes, in everyone's eyes, no matter how pure, or how stained, - it taught you something, it TEACHES us something. For that i'm greatful, honestly, that you wrote this out, that you let us know, let me know. Let me try, and allow us to try and peek in your lives no matter how minor we are.

I hope, I can only hope, its the only thing i can do; that you guys are living a fairly tale love, making choices that you would not regret - no matter how painful it is, or righteous others tell you. Make no mistakes, make no regrets - make memories, make love.

Normally, I'd try and crack a joke here and there, but this story, disabled that. I'm not sad about it, I'm merely too scared to say anything, to scared to choose my words, i can't say 'hey nice update! hope you update soon' because it's not something merely out of a person's imagination, for that, i'm afraid. I'm afraid that things will go wrong, or things went wrong; and most importantly, I'm scared, i'm scared that its too real. I'm scared that it will happen to me, happen to others like you, happen all over again. but like wise, what i said in the beginning of this review; i'm truly humbly and royally speechless. I hope. I hope you make the right choices. I hope. There would be no regret, I hope. I truly hope the best would fall upon you, and Sara. With all my heart and soul, I hope for you two, for love.

~ Omok - the girl who talks too much even if its pointless.
rozlilta chapter 29 . 7/30/2008
Well, I don't really know what to say, I'm not a relationship person, not even social in some ways, and I don't know how to give advices about this.

I just can read what you write and if you want to share this with us, well, I'll read it.

I read this story when you were writing it, and I even read it to a friend who didn't know too much English (not that I know a lot).

Maybe is the story, maybe is the feeling inside every word, I don't know, but we were fascinated, so if you write this sequel we'll be there.
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 chapter 29 . 7/30/2008
omg. your bck. this is so sad :(
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Lilyyayayay chapter 28 . 7/9/2008
Oh my god, i seriously cried. Dead serious.

You guys are great.
TheOutlawHadMercy chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
This is random, but I feel like it should be said. I had left an earlier review, one in which I stated my sadness at hearing that you and Sara had broken up. It seems like I have tremendous bad luck, because soon after reading your story, my girlfriend broke up with me. You -*points finger*- are horrible luck. But, this sequel you mention? I am curious. And the cat will die, but...I suppose that would be my fault. Keep writing!
I.need.caffeine chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Hi Perverse, my name is Ann. I've just happened to read Don't let them know about us, and I'm totally addicted to it. Believe or not but I finished the whole fic in a day.

I want to tell my people about your fic, so I would like to ask your permission to translate (the language I speak is Vietnamese) and post your fic on my group forum.

Hope to receive your reply soon.
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 chapter 28 . 5/17/2008
one moment while i set this computer on fire

WTF? you broke u[ with sara? WHY? why the fuck did you break up? ok im sorry for the language but i read your profile and i just cannot believe it.

dujing by this story, and the fact that you DEDICATED it to her with LOVE is enough to make ppl like moi so scoff at the sight of you guys breaking up

and to think i dont even know you...

are you guys still friends? because i think you just destroyed my farytale of love when you said you and sara broke up

youre awesome, and i think youd be a good friend here



p.s id update the status of the story to complete. is it complete? i hope so, because i dont want the love to end.
Omok chapter 28 . 5/11/2008
Oh my, god, lucky you. Honestly, such a love story, such a lover, such a life. Such a future both of you will built with your hands together - its great isn't it? ) Wow, even after all of that; like you mentioned in your story - people like me can only sit here and admire your love, and wish they were in your place or Sara's place instead...

Hehe, its more than a year since you updated, its more than a year since all of these love have happened, lol, as a random note, I bet your memorized her letter eh? *smiles* anywho, could you please pm me or update a new chapter to let us - the random readers (i'm from Canada)- know about how you guys are doing? I know I know, i'm nosy, but hey! xD Pretty please?
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