Reviews for Don't let them know about us
Omok chapter 27 . 5/11/2008
Wow. this is feels like I've just finished an award winning movie! Man, great, wow, i'm speechless
Andrea chapter 18 . 5/4/2008
Must be really hard for you to write this. And how you have to go back and remember every single thing knowing by the end, it would only hurt you because its not there anymore...

I hope you understand. You're brave. Continue writing. We're all waiting for the sequel!
maria black chapter 28 . 5/2/2008
i read ur story in a matter of 2 days and i loved it. its nice 2 kw that there r other lesbeains in the world(yes i have a girlfreind 2) that feel just like i do. it makes me so happy 2 see that u both found so much love in each other and i hope me and my lizzie can do the same.

love ur story!
Blue Coal chapter 28 . 4/17/2008
Hi there :)

First, I wanna say thanks to you for posting this amazing fiction. I really take to your fic and admire you when you share your real story life with us.

Second, it's more than a year since you last posted the final chapter, however, I just came across your story 2 days ago and after reading your fic, I just can't help myself wondering how Sara and you are doing now. I really wish all the best things will come both of you. I'm looking forward for some extra chapters about you and Sara living now, kinda life, work, friends, and maybe children . Could you please accept it?

Last, thanks again for this incredible fic which I thought just like a dream. I was inspired a lot from your story:)

Good luck for everything!

P/s: I intended to send it as a message for you not a review. However, since I just registerd yesterday (yes, just after reading your fic), it took me at least after 24hours to pm you.
Idiot aeiou chapter 22 . 1/12/2008
emj chapter 28 . 12/18/2007
Wow, I *loved* your story! I was really amazed to find out that it's your own life. That gives some hope to other people discouraged with the tempestuous nature of gay relationships like me :p

Even if it were just a story, it was still enjoyable, well-written and inspiring at the end. You did a great thing by wrapping it up the way you did.

Best of wishes to you and Sara in life.
katherine haynes chapter 28 . 11/7/2007
aw! i love the letter at the end! this is such an adorable story! i hate that it ended, and that is so sad that you guys broke up. you seemed perfect for each other, according ot the story anyways (pleazz don't take that the wrong way!)
katherine haynes chapter 20 . 11/6/2007
totally agree with chloe, someone should have told her that a long time ago
katherine haynes chapter 19 . 11/6/2007
BAD BAD BAD ZOE! bad queen of knives! that is so uncool! why did she do that? the breakup was harsh and all that but that was cruel...but a good chapter, a bit of intrigue...not i feel bad for liking it...oh well! wow, that was kind of random
katherine haynes chapter 15 . 11/6/2007
wow, is being lez such a big deal where you are from? cuz here it isn't a bit deal, there aren't many of us but there are enough so that not everybody is homophobic. i luv this chapter, the whole sister carching them in the act was PRICELESS! that last bit there too was funny actually...
katherine haynes chapter 7 . 11/6/2007
dude, don't most of us queers think its a faze before we actually admit or realize we are straight up queer? and yeah, i comment a lot and don't really shut up...
katherine haynes chapter 6 . 11/6/2007
question, why did sara hiss when she said good-bye? it just seems a bit harsh actually, ubt whatever i love them so much! but why couldn't sara be the king of hearts, but that may have been weird...whatever well i love this story!
kaela t. sheldon chapter 19 . 11/2/2007
this story is so good that it deserves another review. i dunno how guys went thru the things u did, passed the hurdles the way u did cause if i were in ur shoes i'd be dead by now... i read ur profile and i read the news... i'm not gonna say i'm disappointed cause i of all people know EXACTLY what it's like to lose someone you never expected to... long distance relationships r hard (i know that perfectly well too) and i belive that if u felt it was the right decision to make, it was the right decision to make. but i hope good things come for both of you in the future. life's never easy but i feel that the two of u have all the strength u need to survive anything.

great writing, wonderful story, loved every bit of it.
kaela t. sheldon chapter 27 . 11/2/2007
this... is so... brilliant... i can't say anything else that fully lives up to how good this is... u're amazing, seriously. again with the 'wow's.
TheOutlawHadMercy chapter 28 . 8/10/2007
You can't be serious. I just read this entire...damned story and then, only then, do I click on your profile link and you've broken up? What? You've ruined my life. Serious.


Not so serious. I enjoyed reading this quite a bit, and am tempted to show it to my girlfriend. But maybe not. Maybe I'll just go write my own story...danke for the inspiration. I wish the best for you (and Sara) in whatever you do.
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