This is an awesome story! Great plot and you developed the characters greatly :)

Damn...well, I'm off to bed, but I do hope things get better when I pick this up again. Fo sho

Oh...I love it. And on to the next chapter...

this is an amazing story, and i have been privliged to read it. i can only hope that the love you have found is the kind of love that lasts forever. you desurve it, never throw it away, cause then you will never be whole again. this is a beautiful story filled with hardship, but most imporantly, love. so beautiful.

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This is an amazing story, and I hope everything works out with you and Sara.

Baxter

what a great ending! i'm glad you two are able to work things out and stay together despite the spain/sweden difference. this story was wonderfully well-written, and you definitely know how to describe your feelings in a realistic way. it's pretty gripping and whatnot, for a romance. this is like, the ultimate lesbian love story on the voice of the story (aka you) is just so honest and open, which makes this piece especially unique (i mean, how many people/strangers are you willing to tell about what you guys actually do during sex?). anyway, i wish you guys luck with your future.

woah. how strange. great chapter though. i feel some moisture at the corner of my eye.

"For the first time, in the warm darkness of the night, I pleased my body as I whispered…

“Sara…” "

Lol. Now that's a bit creepy...

Anyway, just wanted to pop by and say how I'm enjoying your story! It's really well written and I like all the internal conflict stuff...stuff.

*cries* I read this from start to finish, nonstop. I love it. You two are wonderful. Best wishes for both of you. I've never cried so much for such a short span of story (the time period when you two had broken up and then when you got back together). I've also never smiled so much in a story. I mean, I've been known to chuckle quietly out loud as I read, but I'm not usually this moved by the emotions in a story. You did a marvelous job of writing about a beautiful love story. The best part, I'm certain, is that it's true. You've probably heard this a thousand times, but I'll say it anyway: your love story is such an inspiration to me. Thank you so much for sharing it.

I've been read for a while your story and I love it. I'm so happy for both of you.

Please, let us know more of you when you can

Thanks for share this with us.

why did it have to end? i think you should just keep writing and writing you know about the rest of you life :) i cried a little inside when i read the last page

Thank you so much for publishing your story. I thought it was absolutely lovely, especially since it was true. Its very sweet

This is probably the most beautiful story I've ever read. You two, are simply amazing. I wish more people saw what love is really about. Not gender, but the things inside of you. I wish more people had a love like this. And I hope only good things for you in the future.

This story was amazing love, thank you for sharing it with us.

Well done.

If you have ever heard the song "Beg" From Evan's Blue it seems to fit the story so well. Just chance you say? I think not. xD

~Blowing Smoke Like Halos~

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