|Reviews for Forgotten Sands (original version)|
| Hyde chapter 8 . 9/8/2009
ARGH! What a cliffy! You're just evil. I must say Folko isn't doing so good, but Halan doesn't seem like he's doing much better. Zora rocks, btw. I liked her fight, granted she was having too much trouble with that injury. Off to read more!
| Dude Boy chapter 10 . 8/17/2009
ARGH! What a cliffy! How dare you? XD
Anyways: the chapter was great. Sorta rushed, but it didn't bother me all that much and the antagonists for this arc are intriguing. Sure hope you'll update soon.
| Dude Boy chapter 9 . 8/17/2009
Nice ending to the arc... I really like Folko now and I'm glad he tagged along, but those figures at the end worry me. Wonder when we'll get to see more of them.
Until then: it was a great chapter and can't wait to read the next!
| Dude Boy chapter 8 . 8/17/2009
I must say I enjoyed Zora's fight... it's good to see she can handle herself, even when wounded, especially since she doesn't show much fighting skills up til now.
Folko seems to have some trouble and Halan looks like he's majorily screwed! I need to know what happens next!
| FaytSeeker chapter 6 . 8/11/2009
Poor Folko. Heh, I'm glad Folko is smart enough to work with Halan. I really like this chapter because you revealed Folko's past. For some strange reason, I'm liking Dhalia more and more with her funny personality. Sorry, I couldn't leave a long review but awesome chapter.
| FaytSeeker chapter 5 . 8/10/2009
Ha ha ha! I knew Folko was a cool character. So he's hawk hybrid, huh? Now he's super cool character! As usual, the fight scenes are a sight to behold. Lol even though it's reading, I can imagine the fight scenes in my mind. Reading the next chapter soon.
| FaytSeeker chapter 4 . 8/10/2009
For some reason, I couldn't leave a reply to your review. Thanks for all the advices. This chapter truly have awesome battle details and I love the conclusion especially the jokes between Zora and Halan. The mysterious figure sound really cool already. I'll probably know about him more in the other chapters.
| Pat chapter 10 . 8/8/2009
Well, it was kinda rushed, but you still made it work (I really liked the moment the temple rose from the sand). Those new enemies seem interesting and with Dhalia being a non-fighter type they have Halan and others greatly out-numbered. Skipping the losers it's six to three. I wonder how are they gonna get out of this.
| Pat chapter 9 . 8/8/2009
You sure know how to keep the readers entertained. Even though the arc is over, more foreshadowing. I wonder who those guys at the end were. I'm also glad Folko is joining Halan and others, I really grew to like him. Can't wait to enter the Serpaent's Lair! :D
| Pat chapter 8 . 8/8/2009
Zora's fight was cool. It's good to see she can take care of herself, even when wounded... but such an ending. Halan will survive, right? I mean he's the main character.
Excellent work on the fights, I'm off to read more!
| Pat chapter 7 . 8/8/2009
So the finally match-up is decided. And Zora's gonna fight too... this may be troublesome for her, since she's still wounded, but Sandros didn't seem like a tough guy when he fought Halan, so I'm not sure.
Either the next chapter should prove very entertaining, just like this one was. Good job.
| FaytSeeker chapter 3 . 7/30/2009
Yow...that gotta hurt a lot. Very nice details you have there. I don't think you add too much details on the battles. I love your fights, I can only hope to write good as you, senpai! I can hope to see what moves that Halan would come up with to beat Shira.
| FaytSeeker chapter 2 . 7/30/2009
Wow, that was a beautifully done chapter. The pace is really cool and I love how you conclude with such awesome battle. Your battle details are certainly impeccable. The Black Sun certainly sound dangerous but it's not cool as Halan's spear. I want to see what other forms that it can have lol.
| FaytSeeker chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Wow, this story got my attention because I love weapons with various forms. That's why I like a certain character from Flame of Recca who possessed a golden weapon. Salan from the start sound like a cool character and I felt sorry for Zora. I wish I could leave a longer review like you but I have no complaints about this story. In fact, moving on to the next chapter.
| Frankie chapter 10 . 7/13/2009
Great start to the next arc! I like the setting and the battleground. The opponents seem so-so, but knowing you that's no more then first impression! But what worried me is they're much larger in number then Halan's party.
And furthermore: how the hell is Zora gonna survive?