Reviews for Forgotten Sands (original version)
Frankie chapter 9 . 7/13/2009
I knew I liked Folko :D Great finish to the arc, but I must admit I'm worried: who were those figures at the end? What are they after? And what awaits Halan and others now?

Can't wait to read more.
Frankie chapter 8 . 7/13/2009
Zora's fight was nice... it's good you're not forgetting about her injury. And Halan's match is going nicely too... but such a cliffy... you wouldn't kill the main character... right?

Off to read more!
Frankie chapter 7 . 7/13/2009
Hm... interesting match-up. I'm especially worried about Zora (Folko and Halan can probably handle themselves easily). The fight was great and I do wonder how all this is gonna play out.

Off to read more.
RagnarokWitness chapter 10 . 5/9/2009
And again a great chapter. I love the setting and those 'archeologists' seem suspicious. Wonder what they're capable of, since it seems they're enemies of 'our guys'.

Zora really is in a jam, but Dhalia was left alone with those guys and she can't fight... damn, this is getting intense.

Update soon!
RagnarokWitness chapter 9 . 5/9/2009
Great chapter. That scene where Folko broke Habib's fist rocked! But who were those guys at the end? This is getting more interesting by the chapter. Can't wait to see what the next arc will be about!
RagnarokWitness chapter 8 . 5/9/2009
Great chapter. I really liked Zora's battle and that ending... I sure hope Halan will survive, since he's the protagonist, isn't he? And I'm really looking forward to Folko's duel. Off to read more.
Neat chapter 2 . 4/23/2009
I really like this story so far.

Keep writing!
Ming chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
Well, this chappie seemed a bit rushed, but you got to the very interesting part XD I'll admit the setting seems very interesting and I wonder how it'll all play out, especially since Halan's party seem to have a lot of tough enemies this time around (it's like three to one, if Zora can't fight and apparently she can't... which reminds me: how the hell is she gonna survive this?).

Can't wait to read more, so update ASAP!
Ming chapter 9 . 4/17/2009
Halan is a little sick :D But Folko is just a kickass! His fight was awesome and I'm glad he's tagging along for the story. I can't stop wondering what the next arc is going to be about, coz you got my attention... plus those shadows at the end... things are really heating up!
Ming chapter 8 . 4/17/2009
So Zora won on her own? Nice. Girl power! XD

Both Folko and Halan seem to have tougher opponents though. And such an ending to chapter... could it be you're willing to kill off Halan? I wonder what'll transpire next!
WhiteWolf Kyoko chapter 10 . 4/15/2009
This was a great chapter! Wow I hope Zora can think of some way to stop Beld.

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen in the next chapter!
Jackyl 2000 chapter 10 . 4/11/2009
ARGH! What a cliffy! How could you?

But this arc does seem interesting. A lot of enemies and the battleground gives the impression of being a cool one. But I have a feeling there's still more to it then you shown so far.

Hope you'll update soon, coz I can't wait to read more!
Jackyl 2000 chapter 9 . 4/11/2009
Great conclusion to the arc. I especially liked the end of Folko's fight, really something and manga-like. And those guys at the end... so there was more to it all after all... can't wait to find out what's going on.

Off to read more.
Jackyl 2000 chapter 8 . 4/11/2009
Yay, Zora won! I must say her fight was a good one... and it seems Halan vs. Zartan heats up, but... don't tell me you're actually willing to kill of the main character! I know that with you anything's possible and there's tens of twists in your stories, but isn't that going a bit too far?

Off to read more!
Jackyl 2000 chapter 7 . 4/11/2009
So, the stage is set for the battles... Folko vs. Habib, Zora vs. Sandros and Halan against Zartan... with Zora's injury, all these fights seem interesting, I am a bit disappointed Dhalia isn't gonna fight... unless she'll help Folko in some way.

Off to read more!
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