Oh my. I absolutely adore this! Such a fresh idea, with the perfect blend of fantastic writing style, and obvious humour. I really hope you intend to carry on writing this piece of fiction, it's already made me laugh out loud several times, and I'd love to see where the story goes!

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ha! your character is so cute. on the other hand, i almost know what it's like to be in such a situation and how uncomfortable it makes you about everything.

if you ever start writing again i'd love to read more.

this is... interesting...

I love how it's so short and to the point. really makes it better, and i'm not being sarcastic... really!

keep writing!

So I love how he is black mailing him. And I love how there are no names so I don't have to remember them. I suck at names.

This is strangely fascinating. It's been... a while though, since you updated.

Update, please?

I was wondering when you're going to update.

This is fascinating. 'Tis strange, because it's so brief, but I'm quite enamored with the story.

I cannot see this going well...

I love the character's personality.

Continue!

This is weirdly facinating. I'm not minding the short chapters either, which is strange for me, as usualy I can't stand them.

Can't wait to see where this goes.

Hm, I like it so far. Short chapters actually work for you.

"I find myself with four options: quit, intervention, press charges, or ignore. So far I've picked the third."

I think he picked the fourth option, not the third.

More soon please! I think the short chapters work well for this story, though it leaves one wanting more...

continue please! I really like it!