Reviews for Illegal Activities
Fat Passion Fish Poet chapter 4 . 10/3/2009
Oh my. I absolutely adore this! Such a fresh idea, with the perfect blend of fantastic writing style, and obvious humour. I really hope you intend to carry on writing this piece of fiction, it's already made me laugh out loud several times, and I'd love to see where the story goes!

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med chapter 4 . 7/26/2009
ha! your character is so cute. on the other hand, i almost know what it's like to be in such a situation and how uncomfortable it makes you about everything.

if you ever start writing again i'd love to read more.
Qzz chapter 4 . 6/18/2008
this is... interesting...

I love how it's so short and to the point. really makes it better, and i'm not being sarcastic... really!

keep writing!
Sunshine Bear chapter 4 . 11/25/2007
So I love how he is black mailing him. And I love how there are no names so I don't have to remember them. I suck at names.
Bleed The Dream chapter 3 . 7/16/2007
This is strangely fascinating. It's been... a while though, since you updated.

Update, please?
merrymowmow chapter 4 . 3/7/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update.
eldrin chapter 4 . 1/23/2007
This is fascinating. 'Tis strange, because it's so brief, but I'm quite enamored with the story.
Cattails chapter 4 . 1/7/2007
I cannot see this going well...
Cattails chapter 3 . 1/7/2007
I love the character's personality.
Shadowy Fluffball chapter 4 . 1/7/2007
I Am The Bunny Slayer chapter 4 . 1/7/2007
This is weirdly facinating. I'm not minding the short chapters either, which is strange for me, as usualy I can't stand them.

Can't wait to see where this goes.
Chowdizzle chapter 4 . 1/6/2007
Hm, I like it so far. Short chapters actually work for you.
Chowdizzle chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
"I find myself with four options: quit, intervention, press charges, or ignore. So far I've picked the third."

I think he picked the fourth option, not the third.
obsidiandreams chapter 2 . 1/4/2007
More soon please! I think the short chapters work well for this story, though it leaves one wanting more...
megerdum chapter 2 . 12/31/2006
continue please! I really like it!
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