Reviews for In the Wind
Makebelieve Dude chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
I really liked this a lot. Maybe it's because I'm having a nic fit of my own right now. But the writing is really good and the detail is excellent.
Alena D'Etoiles chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Per your request: I found a couple mistakes. You left out an apostraphy somewhere, and you have a period and a comma right next to each other near the end.

Other than that, I really liked this. I loved the way you worded it and the emotion is very relatable. (Grr...exams.) Nice work.

~.:Favs:.~

Ad'e