Reviews for In the Wind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this a lot. Maybe it's because I'm having a nic fit of my own right now. But the writing is really good and the detail is excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Per your request: I found a couple mistakes. You left out an apostraphy somewhere, and you have a period and a comma right next to each other near the end. Other than that, I really liked this. I loved the way you worded it and the emotion is very relatable. (Grr...exams.) Nice work. ~.:Favs:.~ Ad'e |