Reviews for I'm Getting Married? To My BOSS? |
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![]() ![]() Well...I skin throughout this read... all in all I have to say it could be a true story... YOU..KNOW |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really nice story. It was not very realistic, but I don't complain about that because for realistic things we have real life haha! And I read you want to edit the story! That's great, because one can clearly see how you've grown as a writer :). I'm still a bit confused as regards the length of the periods of time... Did Val and Zach fall in love in a week? two? a few months? I ask this because for example, when Val returns to her apartment after the truth comes out, you wrote that the apartment had been untouched for months... so well, I'm confused :P. Also, maybe I'm just imagining but is it possible that at the beginning of the story Val's ex was "Matt"? But then you changed it to "Mike"? Again, I'm not 100% sure about that. Sorry if it's not the case! I totally understand though, I wrote a story over a long period of time, years actually. And there were some inconsistencies I had to fix (still have to actually!). Keep it up! And greetings from Argentina! |
![]() ![]() GOD BLESS YOU! |
![]() ![]() Nice start! |
![]() ![]() You srsly think that's a cliffhanger? Dude! It's so obvious that the other person Is that Zachary guy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() While it was a bit melodramatic at times, it was also a very enjoyable read. I seriously read it all in one go. Is Valerie Indian? |
![]() ![]() amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() seriously dude. you really need to finish this! it is amazing. I love it! please please please finish it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love it. please please please please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you give up on this story? |
![]() ![]() Really good story please update soon!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its him isnt it update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() More? It is good that her parents finally reconciled with her over the past and Hunter's death. Perhaps this needed to happen before anything meaningful could happen with Zach. |
![]() ![]() i love this story, great work, update soon. |