NO! IT CANT BE LOST! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! ITS TO GOOD!

I like this story already even though I only read the prologue! I'm off to read another chapter. :D

Ahh! That was brilliant!

I love this story.

Update!

:( cliffhanger again! NOO...i needa noe wat happens .

Can I say hit me again bartender? I'll take a shot of that lusty appetite, double shot purleez! Haha, well at leat they made it to da par-tay! That whole dress thing, been there done that, no second date mister! Shame shame. You can look but no touchy! Update soon, still love it!

~Obsession

lol, thanks!

and yes, i love this chapter

i just wish you hadnt left it ona cliff hanger

im here thinking she is gonna get hit by a car or someones gonna die :(

lol

the parents were a perfect touch

awesome chapter

hurry and update

oh no

is she going to get run over

or is he?

or what if Kathrine came and tried to run over Val so that she could get Zach

Wow! What a great surprise for a amazing chapter. Thanks for updating and please continue.

oh no

pliz dnt do this

i dnt like cliff hangers

great chapter, filled with insights and revelations

bless zach, i bet val is the 1st gal he ever fought for

cant wait for the next chapter

i hope she says she loves him.

cant wait e

love it! i'm looking forward on valerie's reaction, but why on earth Zach chickened out in declaring to val that she really love her instead of like?

keep wrighting! must know what happens

pine beacause of the pinecone shape and apple cause of the sweetness. hehe

i dont think that there is ever enough drama in anything lol

still lovin the story

ARGH! i hate cliff hangers but i am to hooked to care lol