Lol, drama craving is totally filled. Come back soon, I would love to know what happens next.

haha the last sentence made me laugh!

u welcome,

i loved this chapter. i saw laughing and smiling while reading dis.

its beautifully written

i think this is one of the best chapter in the story

i cant wait for the next chapter.

zach is day dreaming, someone should kil kat.

zach wants val, he is falling.

AH i know i have not reviwed before but i wanted to readd the wholet hing and i did and i love it to bottom of my feet D its co cute

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update ass soon as u come back from wherever ur going D

Oh...he likes her a lot! He he...this is interesting. And I get it now (the sleeping thing from the last chapter). Update soon!

hi

ok, lol, i was going to ask a question i had from the other chapters..but then your first couple of lines of this one answered it. Everyone knows...except HER lol

But, I loved it...i kept waiting to get back to his POV, loved it. haha..he likes her

*sigh* i dont know you but I'm going to miss you and your updates. Everyone seems to be leaving...and for extended periods :( Have fun and stay safe :)

~P.S.

ah bless them

bless rosy she is funny,

zach and valerie will eventually get close

bcz this is forever hah

i love the chapter

cant wait for the next chapter

Umm...didn't the parents arrange this marriage? Why do they need a story? And who was that person next to her when she woke up. That ending made no sense...

Anyway, try to go back and edit that. Update soon!

I think this chapter is a little dull compared to the last one but I know the next one will have a little drama, so im cool with it.

i like it .. when will you continue for the next chapter? i cant wait to read it..

wow. zach cant resist her, he needs to youch her. lol. i loved it. zach likes to control stuff. cant wait for the next chapter, i loved this chapter, i wonder wat zach was thinking.

Thank you for the update. Please write more.

I love this story. I think Zach and Valerie are so cute together. Are they going to be together in the end. I hope so! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, PLEASE, Update soon.

I just finish reading the last chapter u posted, I must say I really like this story. I cant wait to read the next chapter!

so far so good