Seriously, if his parents want this to work they need to STOP interrupting.

I knew from the moment she turned up at the restaurant "Kat" was gonna be trouble. She needs to retract her claws and remember that she and Zach are HISTORY, Zach and Valerie are the present and future... Kat needs to go far, far, FAR away and sharpen her claws elsewhere.

Also if Zach and Valerie are ever going to have a relationship, Rosy and others need to stop interrupting their private moments. Zach is no longer a baby so there is no reason for his Nanny to be barging into his bedroom... which is no longer just his. If I were Valerie, I'd be uncomfortable with the lack of privacy, considering she's been on her own for a while.

But... don't mind me... I'm just a reader.

Hey... its been so long sisnce you updated that i have completely lost interest in the story... i remember when i started reading it some months ago.. now i don't know whats happening in the story!

Wow...I've been waiting so long for you to update! However, I won't complain, because your latest chapter was absolutely amazing. I love how their relationship has matured and how they're dealing with conflicts like a regular couple. Their blossoming chemistry is undeniable and I fell in love with your story from the start. Please keep updating...I'm sure this story should be nominated for a Skow Award!

I like the story so far but shouldn't it be rated T? Instead of K.

wOw, is Michael putting the moves on her? lol. For a person who confessed to not having updated in a long time, you sure got into the swing of things. This is by far your best chapter, and if not, second or third.

I hope you update soon and that is all

Haydron

(And what has got into Zach? Has he always been this sex-crazed?)

aH, they professed their love for each other! Isn't that sweet? Now the only thing missing from the equation is sex, and lots of it. Darn, that was such a kinky thing to say! (:

The K-rating for this story is a total lie. It should be T at least...(and I'm hoping M later!)

Nah, I jokes, I jokes. Take this the way you want, and I'll happily follow like a blind sheep ;D

I agree- Tis very long. I'm noticing a pattern now- everytime Zach and Val get it on, someone interrupts them. I feel like strangling whoever interrupted each and every time it happens.

Is that bad?

And these guys actually had a in-depth conversation for once! You know, about feelings and their history and stuff. I always view that as a positive ;)

Zach is getting so lovey-dovey! It leaves me to wonder how much is for show, and how much is for real..

Considering he didn't know the reporter was going to be there a chapter or two previous, I'd say the latter but just...aw!

Everytime a kissing scene comes up, my heart just melts.

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lol, never knew 34C breasts had such an affect on Zach...I'm sure Sarah would get implants if she found out (ouch, it was nasty of me to presume she's flat-chested, wasn't it?)

I'M LOVING THIS

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The writing is steadily improving with each chapter. Kudos to you, pal ;D

"Hey, uh, excuse me for a second." And he got up and left.

The person who got up and left needs to be specified. I first thought it was Zach and how random that was, but when she continued her conversation with him I was like, Oh okay...Then it must've been Mike then.

Specify who's doing what- remember that ;)

wow dat waz hot!

dayumm ya gotta write more!

Welcome back! I loved reading this chapter :) Especially the really rocky intimate part between Valerie and Zach :D Can't wait for your next chapter!

i luv this story so much and i was asking if u culd atleast update alittle often and not take too long witthout doing so. i dont mean to be rude. but for the record i luv the story and evrynew chapter makes me more eager for the next...chao