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![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliantly done. I like the different style. A very good job of using 2nd person. Oh, and the last line made the whole story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really great piece. It made me go aww. It's so personal but not. if you get me... x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, jeez. You're just great. These were all so very personal, except maybe: [Why do I hate you? -Your attitude on adults] That kind of threw me off. Everything else was a lot more specific. But yeah, you're pretty much amazing. Keep writing. :D ;)becky |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, that was so nice, so...serene, if you catch my drift. cute, but bittersweet, beautiful but somewhat unhinged. i can't say that i love the last line, however i do understand it. you've been favourited. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another beautiful story, and written in such a creative way. It's amazing how much we can pick up just by reading listed reasons, and each one individually is precious and beautiful, because it invokes such a human emotion of connection. (one of my favorites for why i hate you "you use the slang rock and roll as an adjective"). This was unique, and while some parts made me laugh, some made me almost cry. Very well done! I added it to my favs :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! That was a really creative way of putting it down, and the end really had an oddly final yet dramatic effect. Definitely going to my favorites! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting and poetic! Poetic, meaning that it doesn't quite qualify as fiction. There's no plot and all of that. But it made me laugh, and was very truthful, but kind of...final. If not for the present tense, I would have thought 'Alex' (name in quoty-things to be safe) was dead. Anyway, favorited. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great piece. Definetly a favorite. Very intimate and human, full of personality. Unique without getting annoying. Lovely job. |