This is lovely so far. You're a fantastic play writer, or playwrite, or however you poetic people decide you'd like to be called.

Anywho, I'll be back to read the rest of the chapters. Great job, once again - your characters are so believable in the sense that they have personalities and human-like characteristics. Too few stories these days have inhumanly perfect characters, and it's good to see ones that I can relate to.

I loved this! It was like I was actually seeing it performed. Where did the idea for this come from? -psalm