Reviews for Black Coffee Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE WRITE MORE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I WANT MORE!cute employees! Sign me up any day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The next chapter would be AWESOME! I think the story seems VERY interesting currently. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds cool! Continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() good start but i need to read more in order to know the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well damnit if ur gonna update then please hurry up and update i'd really like to see what happens in the chapters to come; which means you HAVE TO UPDATE! please? thanks, i like how this sounds so far. ;'] hugs!, b.j./H-BGP |
![]() ![]() ![]() So roughly four months later I was browsing through my reviews section when I encountered this story. It was never updated and had only one very short chapter, but I read it anyway. Strangely enough, this plot has a lot of potential. I sure hope you haven't abandoned this, considering it's been about four months already. I find this quite interesting. I would be glad if you would still care to update it |
![]() ![]() ![]() this sounds extremely promising. the way you write is just so beautiful. you haven't updated yet... but i hope one is coming soon. ) keep writing! |
![]() ![]() Hey, update really quickly because I can't -wait- to see what happens. Your writing style is amazing, you have great grammar and all that. I can't wait to see the characters of these 'beautiful gentlemen.' Can't wait for the second part! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds very chill don't forget to update this one, okay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you tell me some embarassing secret of yours so I can blackmail you to continue this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice starting Hope the next chapter will be up soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like. Keep writing. - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... definitely something I'd like an elaboration on. _ Your style of writing alone makes this story seem promising. I've randomly clicked on so much bad writing that something like this is enough to make me giddy. I didn't find any huge grammar problems, so bravo and I can't wait to see who the "beautiful gentlemen" are. ;) |