I did it. I DID IT! I finally reached the end.

See, even if it takes forever, I never quit on these stories.

Because I hate when people quit on mine.

1. Yes, I think Corin died. He was too good, too perfect for the teenagers of that society. He was overwhelmed by the (usually) senseless anger of his fellow teenagers. He could not survive.

2. I think Corin was my favorite character, for the things listed above.

3. I liked when Candy was helping Corin with his injuries and everything after he got beat up by Big.

5. To be honest, I'm not a fan of long chapters. I know that's not really an author-thing, but yeah. Long chapters intimidate me. I'm saying that because really there's not much else to say on your improvement. Your writing is fantastic.

6. Character development was nice. I especially like how far Candy has come since the first chapter.

7. The plot was perfect. Many twists, and it all made perfect sense. Really kept me engaged the whole time.

8. YES.

:O

That is all I have to say right now. TO THE ENDING!

Haha. Sex in the last chapter, drugs in this one...is rock 'n roll next?

Love the stoner angstries. They made me laugh hysterically.

*giggles insanely*

Aw, it's so cute how Candy took care of Corin. Seriously, it made me squeal girlishly. _

:O

Yay, drama!

Again, I must apologize...

But I promise to finish this thing!

Aww, I miss Val...

I love your writing style. You do a great job of making the main character seem real. I liked the ideas for the revolution. "Make pot legal!" _

"Kitchenic", eh? Nice word!

Yeah...sorry I haven't reviewed in forever...but I'm going back now and reading the rest of this amazing story.

It's truly awesome when something can keep me up until 1 a.m. against my will. I do love my sleep.

I'm really interested in seeing if this revolution thing goes any where...sadly, it will have to wait until tomorrow.

Oh man.. it's over. I wish the ending hadn't been left so open.. but yeah. The way the title got explained was pretty cool. Anyway, amazing job overall. I definitely enjoyed reading this story; it's going on my favourites. I hope you write something new soon. )

Whoa.. craziness. I really hope you post the last chapter soon.. I love this story.

Wow, good chapter. Update soon!

What! Whoa, that was unexpected. Ah, Corin is being so weird.. ugh, I want more, please update soon! )

Wow.. poor Corin. Could it have been Val at the back there? This story is so good.. update soon! )

That was kind of hot ) I think it's kind of weird how she told everyone about it though lol some things you should keep to yourself! Overall great chapter ) update soon!

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, stupid LIFE. So BUSY. Gr.

Anyways, it's so great so far! I love the fast pace of it, not one chapter goes by without something at least semi-important happening.

I know I still have two chapters left to catch up, and I shall read them at a later time, when I actually HAVE time, but still...update soon! I have no right to ask since I'm not caught up, but really! UPDATE SOON!