Oh the power play that happens while flirting.

This was thrilling. Subtle flirting, the game of how to make the other one desire us more and finally thinking in their own minds that they won by controlling the action of each other by movement, gaze and desire. This story depicts a simple scene of flirting beautifully

Awesome! Although I can't say I understood much...

I love the way you did the story with the parries and counterattack and all that stuff. Especially since the name is called Duel.

ha! i LOVED this... its very clean (as in crisp) and classy. enoyed reading this!

hehe...nice :) but I don't like the word 'thrust' in this context, it sounds pretty vulgar and it's supposed to be one of those things where you play at saying something, but don't really do so. I know it is part of fencing so...I kinda forgive you, but eeccckk it makes me feel icky

Nice game played :) rofl

Oh, I really like this one. :D I love the whole metaphor of the thing. :]

dunno what to say... definitely know i can say i love this

i started reading then ended up rereading god knows how many times.

] since can't quite sum it up, i'll just say(well, review) that this is awesome

Amazing..

Stupifying

Awe-Inspiring

Bewildering

Dumbfounding

Nonplussing...

yes i used the thesaurus..but still

...wow...

i love the concept its so...not normal

but in a really good way

xD

That was... absolutely WOW.

I can't stand it.

I really can't stand how good it is

Because this is absolutely amazing.

The language, the concept, the depiction;

it's utterly engaging

drawing its readers in

Congratulations, you have duly earned my respect.

I don't often review so consider this a special treat :/

Excellent...all your work is excellent, your characters are unqiue and intersting, your imagry beautiful. Just keep writing

this is interesting! almost captivating-well i think it is captivating. somehow? HAHA. this is god! :]

Huh. Interesting. This is good, too good for words. I'm actually at a loss for words for once.