|Reviews for Duel|
| Otakuami chapter 1 . 10/24/2020
Oh the power play that happens while flirting.
| Otakuami chapter 1 . 7/8/2020
This was thrilling. Subtle flirting, the game of how to make the other one desire us more and finally thinking in their own minds that they won by controlling the action of each other by movement, gaze and desire. This story depicts a simple scene of flirting beautifully
| ARulzz chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
Awesome! Although I can't say I understood much...
| FlyingFran1 chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
I love the way you did the story with the parries and counterattack and all that stuff. Especially since the name is called Duel.
| SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
ha! i LOVED this... its very clean (as in crisp) and classy. enoyed reading this!
| TheLittleGirlWithAFrenchBeret chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
hehe...nice :) but I don't like the word 'thrust' in this context, it sounds pretty vulgar and it's supposed to be one of those things where you play at saying something, but don't really do so. I know it is part of fencing so...I kinda forgive you, but eeccckk it makes me feel icky
| non.graceful chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Nice game played :) rofl
| Sincerely Kalie chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Oh, I really like this one. :D I love the whole metaphor of the thing. :]
| c h i k a chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
dunno what to say... definitely know i can say i love this
i started reading then ended up rereading god knows how many times.
] since can't quite sum it up, i'll just say(well, review) that this is awesome
| Allie chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
yes i used the thesaurus..but still
i love the concept its so...not normal
but in a really good way
| Interstellar chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
That was... absolutely WOW.
| whodoyouthink chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
I can't stand it.
I really can't stand how good it is
Because this is absolutely amazing.
The language, the concept, the depiction;
it's utterly engaging
drawing its readers in
Congratulations, you have duly earned my respect.
| Zephyr Zucchini chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
I don't often review so consider this a special treat :/
Excellent...all your work is excellent, your characters are unqiue and intersting, your imagry beautiful. Just keep writing
| Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
this is interesting! almost captivating-well i think it is captivating. somehow? HAHA. this is god! :]
| freakyAngel chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
Huh. Interesting. This is good, too good for words. I'm actually at a loss for words for once.