Reviews for Late Night Lust
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
Nice work. I like the title.

~Twilight Starr~
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Late Night Lust, it is sad but experiences too. Good poem, it is always good to read one of your works.

Nyghtraven chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
That was really quite sad, but I liked it. You describe the feelings well, and your wording is good. Keep up the good work.

nicholeviathan chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
"To fall head over feet"

That line really bugged me when I read it. It was like a cliche done wrong. But I did like how it rhymed with "neat". It's interesting the contrast you set up with the first and second half of the poem. I'd play the up a little more with wording choice, if I were you.