|Reviews for forgetmenot|
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Mesmerizing, as of all your other poems as well. I enjoy every single one. You have an amazing vision.
Keep it up
| beti213 chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
I have a friend(?) like this.
good use of vocabulary, (indolent! almost like there are smart poets on this site!) sugary-sweetness, and color.
| recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
aww sweet love the whole candy cane thing...cute :)
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
so many little lines in this that are just perfect
cute but sad and reminiscent
last line made me smile :)
| coldsunlight chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
there is always going to be someone to miss.
you express it well.
the last line, it just makes it wonderful.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
I love the half empty half full line... the whole poem is great... it has an awesome poem... not really sad, just wistful maybe... i dunno its wonderfully done
| like a lover chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
dirty with my colors.
i loved that.
| AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
love the metaphor throughout. not cliche but familiar. i interpeted the third line as when the speaker drinks, it fills the other person's eyes up with the murky water in correlation. interesting. beautiful lament.
| i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
gah. you always leave me speechless.
| st. maverick chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
I love this. the almostpain/missing someone is there so wanton and abrupt; it's impossible to miss.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
cheers to the newyear
my heart stops wheni see you have posted something
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
I always loved the name Jude-probably because it reminded me of Judas, much like how Evelyn reminds me of Eve-and the last line was so reminiscent to The Beatles-damnit, I used caps :/-and, oh; you want me to fangirl you like nuts and more so because you already KNOW that I love you(r work).
No. Seriously; every line tastes sweet like candy and has this added kick of something more. Hmn-what would you call it? Seduction, probably, but I'm thinking something along the lines of "romantic and addictive like, um, love and a lot like heartbreak just waiting to happan and i'loveyoualways,justdon'thate(forget)me." No, seriously. It just DOES.
Oh. And I totally read WAY too deeply into this and it might just be the sugar, the cough medicine, my ever-presant fear of the world UTTER DOOM and stuff that will bore you and, yeah-people can now definitly tell that I am tired.
[like when we were kids, sucking on candy canes in July, and sticking to each other,
smile to smile; heart(break) to heart(break)-
"Hey, Jude, where did you go?"] - Oh. I think I love you lots. No, that line completely HAS me and just .sinker. Oh. Ohohoohohohohohoh. Love it. LOVE it.
I want to read all your poems again and again until I just stop writing, because somebody already is doing it beyond perfectly.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
This is such a lovely little piece. The beginning of it reminds me of a poem I wrote called "paint" (original title, I know). But enough about me. I love the "sucking on candy canes in July" part. I can imagine that so clearly. Wonderful. Keep writing! :)
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
oh, isn't it, though. i adore this. as soon as i read the first line, i thought, "yes. i will say i love this line." but then i read the second, and felt unfaithful; the third, and knew i was lost. this is satin and perfect.