Reviews for look me in the eyes so I don't slip away
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
I absolutely LOVE your writing! This was so heartbreakingly beautiful, I loved it. I especially loved

"and you don't even realize that every time you ignore me, that is one more scar you could have healed that you chose to just make deeper" so simple yet beautiful.

I'm off to go read more of your writing!
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
tragic and heartbreaking.. off to read more ;)
S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
You do NOT get enough praise around here. You should be well respected, favorited, and well-reviewed. This was great, really, the last line was awesome. I'd take all of the lines and tell you why I liked them, but really, I don't think I have any words left from my last review. Just be amazed with yourself, because all of your writing is amazingly beautiful.

-Ally
between the lyrics chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
Very well written. Reminds me of my own predicament and brought tears to my eyes. I applaud you.