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| H. Meadows chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
Ive read this multiple times and its cliNging to me. Beautifu beyond belief
| whisper queen chapter 5 . 3/27/2013
i love this, continue?
| in the city of neon and chrome chapter 5 . 12/8/2010
this speaks to me. thank you.
| Fragile Things chapter 5 . 6/15/2010
i dont know what to think of this. chapter 4 was probly my fave... i loved it actually. yeah, amazing job with this. heh
| Lory Winters chapter 5 . 1/21/2009
I can't even begin to comprehend how anyone can be so amazing, especially in so little words.
| NothingMoreNothingLess chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
I read the entire thing, and it's amazing, but this chapter is just gorgeous.
| stained blue chapter 5 . 6/1/2008
you put so much emotion
in only a few words, ha-ha.
(i never seen things so beautiful.)
| sheisdressedinpoetry chapter 5 . 5/22/2008
[We're happy, she said. We're happy. Were happy.] Gradual progression to "were" is divine.
[His lip curled. You laugh too loudly, he said.] this one small image reveals so much. someone who can cut off another person's happiness with a criticism that will lead them straight back to self-consciousness is capable of the worst cruelties.
| sheisdressedinpoetry chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
This clenched me from the start.
i never hear about those who do not instigate yet having no impact seems one thousand times worse than causing destruction.
| half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Wow, this is really interesting. I was drawn in by the two-liner at first - "Some people change you life. / Some people try." It was such a simplistic statement, but it insinuated so much.
I always loved flash fiction... could never write it, though. I tried once and then realized that it crashed (and burned). I'm not one to give up, so I may try again...
But, alas, I digress. :P
Is this due for another update any time soon?
| Gossamer Heart chapter 5 . 3/20/2008
It hurt. But it hurt so good.
You are quite possibly brilliance embodied.
| laughter at the funeral chapter 5 . 2/29/2008
this is just ohsopretty
"did you ever think you mattered?"
now that's something we all should ponder upon
| a silenced revolution chapter 5 . 2/11/2008
I love how it seems to tell a story with short sentences and vignettes. Very nice.
| MinorUrsa chapter 5 . 2/4/2008
then the little girl laughed
and it was just right
| Tytherpol chapter 4 . 8/2/2007
these are absolutely beautiful.