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![]() ![]() ![]() Ive read this multiple times and its cliNging to me. Beautifu beyond belief |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this, continue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this speaks to me. thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont know what to think of this. chapter 4 was probly my fave... i loved it actually. yeah, amazing job with this. heh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't even begin to comprehend how anyone can be so amazing, especially in so little words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read the entire thing, and it's amazing, but this chapter is just gorgeous. Cassandra |
![]() ![]() ![]() you put so much emotion in only a few words, ha-ha. (i never seen things so beautiful.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() [We're happy, she said. We're happy. Were happy.] Gradual progression to "were" is divine. [His lip curled. You laugh too loudly, he said.] this one small image reveals so much. someone who can cut off another person's happiness with a criticism that will lead them straight back to self-consciousness is capable of the worst cruelties. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This clenched me from the start. i never hear about those who do not instigate yet having no impact seems one thousand times worse than causing destruction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() konnichi wa Wow, this is really interesting. I was drawn in by the two-liner at first - "Some people change you life. / Some people try." It was such a simplistic statement, but it insinuated so much. I always loved flash fiction... could never write it, though. I tried once and then realized that it crashed (and burned). I'm not one to give up, so I may try again... But, alas, I digress. :P Is this due for another update any time soon? Ha det -Shan- |
![]() ![]() ![]() It hurt. But it hurt so good. You are quite possibly brilliance embodied. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is just ohsopretty "did you ever think you mattered?" now that's something we all should ponder upon truly yours... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how it seems to tell a story with short sentences and vignettes. Very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() then the little girl laughed and it was just right |
![]() ![]() ![]() these are absolutely beautiful. |