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H. Meadows chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
Ive read this multiple times and its cliNging to me. Beautifu beyond belief
whisper queen chapter 5 . 3/27/2013
i love this, continue?
in the city of neon and chrome chapter 5 . 12/8/2010
this speaks to me. thank you.
Fragile Things chapter 5 . 6/15/2010
i dont know what to think of this. chapter 4 was probly my fave... i loved it actually. yeah, amazing job with this. heh
Lory Winters chapter 5 . 1/21/2009
I can't even begin to comprehend how anyone can be so amazing, especially in so little words.
NothingMoreNothingLess chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
I read the entire thing, and it's amazing, but this chapter is just gorgeous.

stained blue chapter 5 . 6/1/2008
you put so much emotion

in only a few words, ha-ha.

(i never seen things so beautiful.)
sheisdressedinpoetry chapter 5 . 5/22/2008
[We're happy, she said. We're happy. Were happy.] Gradual progression to "were" is divine.

[His lip curled. You laugh too loudly, he said.] this one small image reveals so much. someone who can cut off another person's happiness with a criticism that will lead them straight back to self-consciousness is capable of the worst cruelties.
sheisdressedinpoetry chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
This clenched me from the start.

i never hear about those who do not instigate yet having no impact seems one thousand times worse than causing destruction.
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
konnichi wa

Wow, this is really interesting. I was drawn in by the two-liner at first - "Some people change you life. / Some people try." It was such a simplistic statement, but it insinuated so much.

I always loved flash fiction... could never write it, though. I tried once and then realized that it crashed (and burned). I'm not one to give up, so I may try again...

But, alas, I digress. :P

Is this due for another update any time soon?

Ha det

Gossamer Heart chapter 5 . 3/20/2008
It hurt. But it hurt so good.

You are quite possibly brilliance embodied.
laughter at the funeral chapter 5 . 2/29/2008
this is just ohsopretty

"did you ever think you mattered?"

now that's something we all should ponder upon

truly yours...
a silenced revolution chapter 5 . 2/11/2008
I love how it seems to tell a story with short sentences and vignettes. Very nice.
MinorUrsa chapter 5 . 2/4/2008
then the little girl laughed

and it was just right
Tytherpol chapter 4 . 8/2/2007
these are absolutely beautiful.
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