"she spelled the letters against the pulse in his wrist".. i really like that.

i feel like this piece is pleasingly deformed. the chapter format is kind of neat too.

I don't know if I would offend you if I said that I laughed when i read this, but I found it funny. It's jsut so true, and so sad.

It's amazing how you can utterly kill me in 18 words or less.

you're ama-sing.

The complexity in your words astound me. It's as if you continuously transform a cardboard box into a masterpiece. That's really the only way I can explain it right now.

I enjoy reading all of your pieces. You are very very talented.

Gah. You amaze me. There's something so brokenly beautiful about this. I love how you can convey such feeling in such few words.

I'm only going to review this one of your works but I've read a lot of them and let me say, ordinary mortals like us strive to write like you one day. Seriously.

love it. amazing. i love hate-filled love. it's very... sexy, in a raw sort of way, becuase when you get down to it, there really is a fine line between love and hate.

god, it hurts.

So I just read a bunch of your work (but this is the only part I'm reviewing cuz I'm just evil like that) and.. well.. I adore it. Is this one complete? (I hope not..)

These short pieces leave me speechless. You say so much in just a few lines. These short pieces may leave me speechless, but tears come to my eyes.

and here's the revenge. i love it when things work out like this. is there a continuation?, just wondering.

i like this. like those "there's two kinds of people in the world" quotes but definitely better. it's a wonderful start to a collection if that's what you intended.

secretive

i like it

it is pretty

but are the cuts along her neck?

very true

the last chapter blows the other two away.