|Reviews for Oblivion|
| the upward glance chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Well that made me cry...
That's a compliment.
I love it when a story moves me, gets to me, hurts me.
Your character's life very much mirrors my own.
I enjoyed your style here, and the digressions into mundane topics he takes as the blade is poised over his wrist.
There's such juxtaposition there!
Because death is of such a profound magnitude, or not. Depending on one's philosophical outlook hehe
I dunno...the collective pieces you integrated into the story are just great.
I could probably list all the things I loved, but I shan't
Oh and the title...perfect.
OH! And I love how he didn't even realize he had slit his wrist...that was very powerful.
I find solace in writing, too.
I hate the whole "I'm so sorry" "I understand" sympathy bit.
I always found it useless, because you can never understand what another thinks or feels...
And I care.
I'm glad though that you've moved beyond this. Very glad. :)
| Kumori Neko chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
I feel your pain, although of course pertaining to a different, but similar, situation in life. The first time I drew blood... I didn't expect it to feel the way it did...
Anyways, I'm sorry this happened to you, but like me (or so I have been told) you're good at explaining it all out so others can understand how you feel.
| EnderWinner chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Wow... for how dark the piece is, it's somehow reassuring in a very odd way. *shakes head* sorry I've been missing reviewing Kane's field. I've been... busy as hell. Wow, good piece here. Nice to know sometimes you aren't alone.