Reviews for and that was just the beginning
MizSphinx chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
The format was totally cool and helped the reader to be interested in more of the poem. I like the little argument, LOL, it seemed so REAL! And boy...that format, that must have been REAL time consuming...

-MizSphinx
gothic-allure chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
The format is a bit odd but the poem is great! I really love it. Its sweet and true.
thestonedfox chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
This was written wonderfully, but I almost didn't read it because of the formatting. Your poem is beautiful and sometimes the formatting can help convey the message but when it comes to the point that it actually takes away from what you've written, then I think that's a clear indication that it's getting to be too much.

Just a little constructive criticism there for you. Still, great job.