Reviews for Spit
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
It flows so nicely; it really does and every word seems to just work beautifully all on its own. Its really beautiful.

Oh. And that last stanza? Brilliant. It completely owned me and, oh yes.

Perfect.

- Noelle
Earthbound Angel 49 chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
i like this so much! it made me giggle when i got to the last line.
thestonedfox chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Oh, what a wonderful depiction of post-break up agony. The rhythm and imagery was perfect. Nice!
Jhureina chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
Love it! The rhythm is really catchy and the wording is just...great!