Reviews for Spit
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
It flows so nicely; it really does and every word seems to just work beautifully all on its own. Its really beautiful.

Oh. And that last stanza? Brilliant. It completely owned me and, oh yes.


- Noelle
Earthbound Angel 49 chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
i like this so much! it made me giggle when i got to the last line.
thestonedfox chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Oh, what a wonderful depiction of post-break up agony. The rhythm and imagery was perfect. Nice!
Jhureina chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
Love it! The rhythm is really catchy and the wording is just...great!