Reviews for Four Seasons
Frore chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Oi...

The text, the text, the text.

It is good for aim profiles, but I would leave the stylistic dashes, dots, bold text, brackets, etc. well alone for pieces of poetry. It is very difficult to read, and makes the composition feel very puerile.

Your writing itself is not bad, but it is masked by all of that decoration! Take it away and I am sure this poem would be better for it. Keep writing!