|Reviews for The Notebook|
| Orual chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
I love how perfectly you describe this girl. It's like she's someone I know, or could know. Probably because I think we're all like her, to one degree or another. It's a lovely poem, and I think it'd be good as a series of poems, actually. Good work, in any case.
| emeraude-irlandais chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
I have a notebook, too, so I can definitely relate! "Unstarted poems" is a good idea, but the phrasing is a little awkward, however, the poem has a "string of consciousness" feel, so the phrasing isn't as important as the content. I really like this, it made me appreciate my own notebook a little more. :) Keep writing! ~bella~