Reviews for Her Poems
Raquel Simone chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
I really like this poem. I think it is wonderfeully written, and I can identify with it.
synanceia chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
I like this. In the beginning I liked the way the same word was used in three lines and then something different in one. You could have kept up with that all the way through. But I like what you have to say with this. One thing you should change though is that in the thrid stanza second line you write "When he was world her world," I think you mean "When he was her whole world,".