Reviews for i'd forget you so much easier if you'd get a room
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
I liked this piece, there is a lot of emotion in it. I liked this line, "like no one else exists (I never do when she’s around)"

The part about twisting the dagger really displayed the feeling of pain and hurting.

The crash part I didn't really get but the stanza after that was good and the last line about the ashes of jealousy was amazing!

Nice poem. I enjoyed reading it!
XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
i love all your titles! their really good! i really like this and it makes me want to read more of your stuff...so i am haha keep writing.
S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
This was perfect and emotion filled and I loved it. The descriptives were amazing like usual, and all of it was just... brilliant. This was just... great.

but stop twisting the dagger around, god please

That was a wicked good line, it really showed emotion.

The CRASH with BUI was really good; most of the time that I see stuff like that it annoys me but this time it just seemed to work.

And the last stanza was PERFECT. I loved the imagery and the part about the ashes of jealousy was way of showing feelings.

This was awesome, like all of your works.

-Ally