Reviews for oh hollywood hello
Caffeinated Cupcake chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
oh this is beautiful

i cant even begin to describe how mediocre i felt after reading this

your strong personal voice is breathtaking

i love it; keep up the good work
Jarlaxe chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Wow...wow. That was amazing, you are an excellent poet. Just everything was good, like ya good job. I think the message and everything in it the way it painted pictures every single line, you could see the lifestyle and the corruption and the ending was great, and that was fantastic. I think the only thing I would say to maybe...maybe revise, would be the only line that hung Me up, but it could just be me.

bled through the napkins when we blotted the alcohol

from our lips.

I would probably, and you can tell me to flock off but:

bled through napkins when we blotted alcohol

from our lips.

Pretty minor I know but hey, a word here a word there, but revision is revision, anyways awesome job.
beatrice is hot chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
sweet.