You've captured a lot of emotions in this piece, even though it is short. Nice job. It was a great read.

Lacy

Beautiful. All of it, just beautiful. My favorite line was the last- "My caged heart was gently, ever so gently, falling to pieces." I love it.

~Yeeger

nicely done

I loved it!

Beautiful, simply beautiful. I could picture it all in my mind when I was reading it...great job!

Very nice. It grabs attention and made me ask for more.