Reviews for fall
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
your style has a really clear, touching voice to it...very intimate and compelling. I love the last line especially, the flow is gorgeous. Keep it up.
emeraude-irlandais chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
God, that's gorgeous. "She left the light on and it's burning-...Fall, and oh I would simply lose my mind" is amazing. I want to critique it, but I can't. It's too...good. Gah! ~bella~