|Reviews for The Straw Man|
| emeraude-irlandais chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Interesting idea! Contemplative, but not overly so- just a thought stream on a particular, albeit unique, subject. My only critical comment is this- if it were a scarecrow, would it truly be standing "amongst" the ocean? Besides that, however, the ending is wonderfully powerful and poignant. Again, a very entrancing concept. bella
| Dani P chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
good poem, however some lines didn't seem to flow and felt a little awkward, and the last lines held lots of meaning and mystery, you could prolly incorporate more of that feeling throughout the poem. Great job. Keep writing.