Reviews for Just Catch Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh jeez! I love Syeira! She's a one sassy girl :D And Jason, maybe he's a jerk but I like him anyway :) I hope you'll update soon ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Jason has potential. But... Syeira is my fave so far. I like Cassy though-she's sassy :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story keep up the great work and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, c'mon, you can't do this to me! UPDATE SON! PLEASE? Loved it. Keep Writing, xxTunstall Chickxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! This is so funny I can't wait until you update I'm so hooked. So much for a friend I mean she wans't even sorry for getting with the ex. I bet she was the one he cheated on Syeira with, and that they were probably extatic that she left. Jason argg!*You can't see but I'm shaking my fist at him.*lol. update soon. Looking forward to more: ~Obsession |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's such a kickass story! Please continue it! Seriously. Jason ALMOST has an ego the size of America or something. But still. I do wish Syeira would do something evil to him during the tryouts. *evil grin* |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is really intrestin, so plz update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() funny so far. update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww i can totally undestand syeira my parentz hav made move in2 different countries twice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Usually I don't review stories like this one, but I decided to make an exception for yours. It's funny at certain parts and you have a somewhat decent plotline, but your characters could do with a bit of maturing. That is, maybe a little more personality. Not a tad too much because they have their overall, basic personalities, but I'd like this story even more if they had a bit more. Now if you haven't forgotten about this story and intend to update it sometime in the near future, I will be definitely be back if for the sole reason because my curiosity is piqued. Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So excited for next update. Oh and one quick question- Will "Just Catch Me" come in at some point in the story or be related to the the story somehow, or is it just one of those titles where it has nothing to do with the story but still fits? Just wonderin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's pretty good. For some reason, I can't seem to get into it, into it, you know? Maybe I just need to read more. Maybe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE pwetty pwease...? AS IN NOW. Love. Peace. Update. Kira. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok, at the risk of sounding like a fangirl, omg i love lovehina! and i love your story too. keep writing! i want to see what's gonna happen next (ie. chapter 5, im not a retard lol) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i luv ur story so far! keep up the updates |