The story was really interesting and I definitely couldn't stop reading it. However, who was the Smith writing letters to Nick's dad and what were they about. I believe if the story was edited and had more details, it could have excelled even more!

This was so awesome! I absolutely loved it! Nick and Alice are so cute together. I loved Chick! She's hilarious. Awesome story! Well done x.

So cute ️

thanks

I realize this is an old story, but in the hopes of sending encouragement someone's way...

I am thoroughly enjoying your story! The shared space, but not time idea is very engaging. I hope you are still out there somewhere writing :)

Loved, loved, loved it!

That was quite wonderful really. It had an interesting concept, it was easy to keep track of (which considering its content is quite a feat) and had a hilarious culture/time clash. I wish I would have seen a bit more of it in the mannerisms but it was still fantastic. A good use of time.

I feel like throwing up, it's so sad to finish reading it In my country is midnight, and I'm just sitting in my computer, biting my nails and listening to some music and BAM one of the most glorious stories I had the pleasure to read is done. Feel like crying too. So sweet. I couldn't believe Mr. Andrews was Nicholas grandson, I thought he was like Uncle Alfred reincarnated, so creepy. And bad, nothing to do with his granddad. Oh, Holy Shit, my eyes are all watery...
Alice, so good to be real. Nicholas too. Wished there would be something to connect me to the nineteenth century in my room, sadly my house was build like, then years ago :( But still, LOVED this story.
Regards,
Diane.

Hey i just read your story and i loved it! I was looking for finished storys and found it. I read it in one sitting. I just couldnt stop i had to know if they had a happy ending. You are an amazing wrighter keep up the good work.

A very excellent and memorable story.

I would strongly recommend that you copyright this story. In the future, as your writing skills continue to improve, this story would make an excellent novel.

Loved it! Can't really have much to say aside all of the talent you carry :D

Hmmm... I didn't particularly like it. There wasn't much of a plot, and it was quite boring...

Loved the story XD

My goodness that was one hell of a story u should get it published you know! Needless to say i loved it. :)

I really loved it in the end! It's really well written, doesn't has negligible grammar and punctuation errors and the storyline is just amazing! Although, it seemed as though the ending was a bit rushed, but still a good ending!

I'm really not sure whether you'll ever read this review, considering I'm about 5 years late, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story and am so glad that you left it up! This is definitely going onto my favourites list.

Cheers,
TQL