Reviews for Walls Apart
Tiger-Sparks chapter 18 . 10/9/2008
This story is absolutly amazing! I really love the idea for it.

Katie
flawedxu chapter 18 . 9/30/2008
i loved it! absolutely amazing. i just finished, i didnt want to review until i was completely done with reading it. you should consider trying to get this published for real, you know? unless you already decided to try & that. It was really, really good.
mistress tee chapter 17 . 9/27/2008
(oh and had to add you as well. 'cause you're a great writer!)
mistress tee chapter 18 . 9/27/2008
aw this is such the Cutest story ever! aw I love it! Though there is one grammatical(sp?) mistake that I noticed through out the story. whenever you were saying someone would get things you spelled the word "realised" when it is spelled "realized" (or you did spelt instead of spelled. :P) but that is all. lol positively loved the story!
midnitefaeri chapter 16 . 9/17/2008
that took her long enough to notice...
La La Land chapter 18 . 8/17/2008
This story was fabity fab fab! I LOVED it. you really know how to display the charecters emotions, and i love love love Nicholas :D
choc me chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
I was thinking that this story deserves much more reviews! lol

I mean sure it's got a lot, but still "walls apart" is not getting enough recognition..

I'm missing it! yeah I said that already..

By the way..I've noticed in a couple of chapters you wrote "twentieth century" instead of "twenty first century".
choc me chapter 18 . 8/13/2008
Oh wow! I'm so so sad it's over! I truly loved it! And it was so well-written too! I'll miss all the characters, especially Nick..sniff!
ileum chapter 4 . 8/11/2008
Oh! That makes sense.
ileum chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Move along!

Nicholas seems like an interesting character,

And although his uncle is far from pleasant, the way he talks is just amusing.
Elle Winters 9 chapter 18 . 8/5/2008
oh wow this was a really great story. I only started reading it when I saw it on your other prfile though, maybe you should repost it under your new profile again?
l'heautontimoroumenos chapter 18 . 7/31/2008
Great story. I loved uncle Alfred very much.

You should do a sequel, though, about uncle Alfred or Harry.

Talking about Harry, it's a pity we didn't see a little more of him.

Anyway, real good story.
Skylar Alexander chapter 18 . 7/30/2008
This story was brilliant. I enjoyed it very much. Great job.
Skylar Alexander chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Okay, I'm liking this so far, and am curious to see where it'll be going in the later chapters (even though you're done writing it and stuff. XP)

Liked these lines here... "His Uncle greatly resembling a vegetable and cat; all purple and red and hissing profanities." and "practically a naked rabbit amongst a town full of fully clothed foxes?" The former made me laugh, and the latter was just awesome. XP

-Skylar
atreyu love chapter 18 . 7/22/2008
i LOVE it.

they are so cute together and im glad

he found a place and adjusted to the 21st century ;)
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