|Reviews for disallusioned|
| Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
good golly! there's more angst in these new 3 than has been in awhile!...my naku sense is tingling...i do love the imagery in this one tho! "blooming paths of blackened rage" "dewdrops of despair cloud your mind"...them dang dewdrops add up and if you let it, it becomes a torrential downpour! i should know...i practically have to wear my depression floaties al the time. XD...behold as i laff at something that really should'nt be funny...but i'll laff anyways. ha.
| Aryanda chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
WONDERFUL imagery! I especially liked the line:
"Blooming paths of blackened rage"
Wow. You have talent. Keep it up! Great job!
| 123454321 chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
The last line is great: "This lifeless doll breathes no more".